Pretty pleased with the result of the summative. I'd been hoping for a 1st this year, but I've resided myself to the fact that it's more likely I'll get a 2:1. And I'm quite happy with that!
I've made some cuts and additions to comply with what the tutors said. Sean suggested cutting the "double gag" with the cymbal sliding away at the end and making its true sound. He also suggested shortening holds. Agree with both of these, as my animatic was considerably longer than the original draft.
Paul's comment was to give the guinea pig a reason for playing the drums. I sat with Jo and worked out a new sequence, where the guinea pig is looking at a poster, longingly. This makes use of a couple of shots that I animated, but needed cutting, and gives potential for a strong title sequence and introduction.
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